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2 thoughts on “week 11 book publication”
Hi Wing,
I am cotacting you though your crj.
I have seen the book design so far and I have to say a big thumbs up for the amount of work that you have produced.
My favourite is the We’re no prisoners work.
I think the type for the project could be a bit more in line with the project.Sorry can’t think of one to match though.
The backgroup of cream looks, and I hope you don’t mind me saying, a little dated.I think by picking out the greyish blue of the sky you might be a bit more current.take that colour all the way through the book where there is cream.Alternatively you could delineate the three separate projects with different a diffferent mood of colour. Also could you explore a black border like a full frame to make the prints ‘jump off the page’.
lastly and I am by no means an expert…….Pop all your text through grammarly to sharpen up the sentence structure.especially Your Artists statement.
My favorite p90 beautiful with the mountains in the background.The light!!!!
Best wishes,
Megan
Thanks Megan, I am still a bit undecided on the design of the cover>
2 thoughts on “week 11 book publication”
Hi Wing,
I am cotacting you though your crj.
I have seen the book design so far and I have to say a big thumbs up for the amount of work that you have produced.
My favourite is the We’re no prisoners work.
I think the type for the project could be a bit more in line with the project.Sorry can’t think of one to match though.
The backgroup of cream looks, and I hope you don’t mind me saying, a little dated.I think by picking out the greyish blue of the sky you might be a bit more current.take that colour all the way through the book where there is cream.Alternatively you could delineate the three separate projects with different a diffferent mood of colour. Also could you explore a black border like a full frame to make the prints ‘jump off the page’.
lastly and I am by no means an expert…….Pop all your text through grammarly to sharpen up the sentence structure.especially Your Artists statement.
My favorite p90 beautiful with the mountains in the background.The light!!!!
Best wishes,
Megan
Thanks Megan, I am still a bit undecided on the design of the cover>
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